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标题:[原创]卸甲惜别

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軍釖煭焱 发表于:2010/8/3 0:49:23
                                                                   空缀群星,­

                                                                  三千步兵营,­

                                                               一声低号沉鸣起,­

                                                                   萧萧寂静。­

                                                               引人落寞,这情....­

                                                                  恍如昨日景。­

                                                                   金戈践踏,­

                                                                  誓血染青天,­

                                                               峰火励炼战刃前,­

                                                                  壮士勇争先。­

                                                               挂月披星恨天短,­

                                                                  群杰比疯癫。­

                                                                    嘹亮军号,

                                                                  惹得群狼啸。

                                                               铁甲阵阵如洪流,

                                                                    狂野似刀。

                                                               所向披靡,无鞘....     

                                                                    战旗冽冽,­

                                                                   兄弟再难逢,­

                                                               敢忘血汗相随同,­

                                                                   善恶亦影重。­

                                                               禅香嗜血义结盟,­

                                                                   傲气势如宏。­

                                                     ­                血色骄阳,

                                                                   映红练兵场。

                                                                豪情依旧人难留,

                                                                   男儿亦柔肠。

                                                                区区一个老背囊,

                                                                   怎装得下满腹惆怅。。。。。。

                                                                   ­

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凭缘相逢 发表于:2010/8/3 6:29:57
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五行真人 发表于:2010/8/3 8:13:18
好!赞一个!
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胜利 发表于:2010/8/3 9:09:00
好诗,豪气冲天,气势如宏。
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摆渡 发表于:2010/8/3 12:36:31
 区区一个老背囊,

                                                                 

  怎装得下满腹惆怅。。。。。。

 

还有无尽的失落。。。

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微风 发表于:2010/8/3 13:27:28

 

      满目离愁话别意,

      一腔别绪留心底。

      军营相聚已数载,

      一朝奉命各东西。

[此贴子已经被作者于2010-8-4 12:01:07编辑过]
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马立昆仑 发表于:2010/8/3 18:07:18
哈哈,背囊太小,可用装甲。
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轻云微月 发表于:2010/8/4 13:12:15

嘹亮军号,惹得群狼啸。

钢铁老兵,网络续征程。

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绿洲 发表于:2010/8/4 22:15:44
军营生涯感诗,赞
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坐看云起 发表于:2010/8/5 10:22:03
诗言志,有豪情.
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